tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6133347147715879522.post2207291760512093481..comments2016-12-29T20:05:10.247-05:00Comments on Not Know, Notice: This One Time (Part 1 of at least 2)Lee F. Sheppardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14711494866179762128noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6133347147715879522.post-22585371991524107442015-11-03T01:51:08.591-05:002015-11-03T01:51:08.591-05:00You've progressed impressively using second pe...You've progressed impressively using second person narrating, Lee. I love the comedy you weave in; makes me feel like I might actually be clever enough to imagine things like the conductor named David or comparing a soaked man to a Big Foot drawing. Great piece, looking forward to the continuation!-- arhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02058700424783035484noreply@blogger.com